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Subject: Re: be my friend! :)

subhash Agrawal (117.196.181.*) wrote on 21.04.10 at 07:02

Monica wrote:
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> hi Subhash!
> I'm a bit tired cause I travelled all night...but i'm
> ok,thanks for asking.and what about you?
> it's correct what you said,i think the same as you!
> my msn is bolond_gyerek@hotmail.com
> add me!bye bye
> have a nice day!
> Hi Monica,
I am glad to find that you have included my in the panel of your friends.Thanks a lot.As our purpose is to improve and make better English,I would like to mention some corrections in your above text,please don't mind.although i am also at learning stage and I think there is need of some corrections.
1 I am a bit or a little bit tired because I had travelled whole night.
2 In writing,shortened forms are generally avoided they are generally used in speaking.
3This is correct what you have said.
4 I am fine and doing well.I always think how the English can be made better and influential.
Bye-Bye
subhash
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